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    2016年托福考试写作点睛:名言和话题

    来源:乐教考试网 发布时间:2016-07-01 10:09:09 点击量:200

    我们都是到写作文开头段写的精彩不只会增加作文的亮点,写的行云流水也会减轻前期写作构思的压力,总之好处大大的,开头段我们都知道无非就是改写题目,改写就是针对题目进行相应的增加或删减或替换单词。下面我们就来看看两种开头段的模板:

    第一种是需要编一句名言的,适用于前期积累了一些名言或者比较正式的话题。

    Sample

    one(适用于有一些背景or有一个中心词而且编得出来那个quotation的所有情况(二选一,agree

    or disagree,除了个别);

    要做的:想一句简单的背景+编一句名言+改写两次题目

    On

    contemporary society(一般的背景)/

    With the advent of the technologically advanced society (the information

    explosive era(与科技有关的背景),XX(中心词)serves as a catalyst for our future

    success/XX is synonymous with knowledge and the road to success/XX plays an essential/increasingly important

    role in…/XX is enjoying an increasingly high popularity among people./很简单的一句背景 ,However,people(universities,

    government, citizen, society,) are/is invariably faced with such a question/

    can’t help wondering:改写题目1.Confucian

    (Yu Qiuyu,

    Mark Twain, William Shakespeare), (one of) the greatest and most influentialChinesephilosophers (scholars, educators, writers, thinkers, statesmen), has

    insightfully commented, “___编____”I

    cling to an unshakeable belief that his comment gives the answer to this

    question:改写题目2. Among countless factors which contribute to

    my position are following conspicuous ones(最后一定排比结尾,且如果字数够了这一句就不要)

    第二种是不需要编名言,或者适用于比较非正式的话题。

    Sample

    two:(如果sample

    one的名言编不出来或者不适合编如leisure

    time,就用下面的)

    要做的:想一句简单的背景+改写两次题目+总起(最后写)

    On

    contemporary society(一般的背景)/

    With the advent of the technologically advanced society / On account of …,XX(中心词)serves as a catalyst for our future

    success/XX is synonymous with knowledge and the road to success/XX plays an essential/increasingly important

    role in…/XX is enjoying an increasingly high popularity among people./ 很简单的一句背景( 如so…that…/not only…but also).However,when it comes to the choice between

    AA and BB/When asked about whether改写题目1, people get into a dilemma.

    According to my personality and experiences/As far as I am concerned/From my

    perspective, I cling to an unshakeable belief that改写题目2.以下最后决定怎样写:Among

    countless factors which contribute to my position are following conspicuous

    ones(最后一定排比结尾)/AA not only…but also(2)/There are various merits

    AA brings about, first of all, to…; secondly, to…;and lastly….

    开头段之后就是中间段落的论述:

    2、分点一:分层论证 Basic to any understanding of the

    benefits we can get from _______ is that__________/ First and foremost, On one

    hand_________, On the other hand_________ Besides/ What’s more/ In

    addition. 这一段主要说理,在分论点里可以加一些小的例子细节,重点是要用一些精华句子!

    3、分点二:举例论证 Further leading credence to my

    position is that____________ (简单阐述/例子字不够就多讲点废话)I can

    think of no better illustration than the example of(典型例子) / A

    case in point is that(不是很典型)________,一句话总结例子:As a

    result,强调句/倒装句/表利弊的句型/反面论证如果没有会怎样

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